The little girl and the monster
Once upon a time there lived a wonderful little girl. called Lilly. Lilly had friends called Mikayla.W and Mikayla. R. One day in the forest. Lilley went to find her friends in the forest.. Then she heard a noise. It was a spooky noise. Lilly was scared. She yelled!! “Mikayla Mikayla” but they couldn’t hear.
The monster came closer so she ran back home. She looked in her room then she went up stair. She saw her mum and dad laying on the floor. She screamed and screamed she heard the door open. It was the monster. The monster had google eyes, ears, mouth and nose.
The monster said’’ I ate your friends’’ Lilly said’’ what did you do?’’ he said ‘’I ate them now I want to eat you’’. Lilly ran up stairs and hid under the beds.
The monster came up stairs and Lilly got her dads gun and shot him and she lived happily ever after.
By Paige.w
Thats a great story paige
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading your story because it had very detailed words and had full stops and captil letters in the right place well done!!!
ReplyDeleteA scary story Paige. I like how you have used speech marks to make your writing more interesting.
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