The Haunted House
Errrr Keeley, Emma and Grace opened the door to a haunted house. In the night Emma heard noises and saw dye. She thought it was blood. She also heard the phone ring but there was no one there. So Emma screamed and woke up the girls. The girls woke up “what’s wrong” they shouted. “The phone rung and there was no one there” said Emma. “I’m sure you were dreaming” moaned Grace. So they went for a walk through the house.
They saw a Skelton on the ground with blood on its face, bats flying through the sky too. They saw ghost too. The ghost sang “boom boom ci boom boom ci”. “Wow that’s weird” said Keeley. “I know” said Emma “it’s a miracle” laughed Grace.
“Sooo what is your name” said Keeley “They do speak English you do know” “of course I do”. So they went up the creaking stairs with an old pole that was dusty to hold on to. “We forgot to introduce ourselves sorry” “please don’t be” said the girls.
“Well my name is Annabelle and my name is Amber” and the girls said “my name is Emma and my name is Grace and my name is Keeley”. “Well nice to meet you” “nice to meet you too”.
“Ow what is that “ Emma screamed. “Ow food” the ghosts said. “What is it?” “goat”. I have to get out of here said Emma because she was a posh girl.
“Don’t’ stand there” “why?” “there’s a bat family there”. “Ow” Emma fainted.
Grace ran up to Emma and sprayed perfume around her nose. She woke up “I am so glad your alive” said Keeley.
The two ghosts said “are you alright”. “pretty” “cut it out” yelled Keeley. “Sorry” said Emma.
The girls helped Emma up on her feet and went for a walk around the house and found their home.
So the girls said “thank you”. “Its alright” “bye” “bye to you to” they said.
Emma got home and said “hi mum”. Mum said “where have you been?”. “You don’t need to know” said Grace.
And they lived scared for all their lives.
By Elise
Monday, September 20, 2010
Thursday, September 16, 2010
The Haunted House
The haunted house
Owwww yelled Amber as she was putting pretty bows in her hair
“Pink and perfect” she yelled, “pink and perfect”. As she ran down the stairs she was singing “it’s my birthday, it’s my birthday and it’s going to be the best birthday ever!”. Then she was down the stairs, she sat on the couch, “where’s my breakfast” she yelled. And the Olivia her sister came down. She had purple bows in her hair.
After breakfast they went to school, Jake was out at the gate. He said “what took you so long?” Amber replied “why my hair can’t make itself”. “fair enough” Jake said. After school they were walking home, Jake found a cool house, it had skeletons on it. “Lets go and see who lives there”.
They knocked once, twice and three times. Then they opened the creaky door. Jake went in, Amber went in, “Olivia shut the door” said Amber. “Look a key” Jake said. “oh no the door locked on us, and where’s the key going now?”. “I don’t know, follow it then” said Amber. “Ok” every one said.
Olivia said “we’re on a roller coaster, yuck it has weird looking seats and they’re boney”. “Why are we sliding? Olivia what is it? I think it’s raspberry, I don’t know? Look the key it’s gone somewhere, Jake it’s behind you” Olivia said. “Stand still, Amber yelled Help” said Olivia. Jake whispered to himself “man they’re noisy”. “Sush” said Olivia, “ok”.
Huddle in we will make a plan. “Olivia you go behind Jake and I will go in front and we will jump and catch it”. “Ready steady, spaghetti”. “Sorry its just so funny, ready go! I caught it” said Olivia. “good now how are we going to get back up?” said Amber. “I don’t know we will have to go back on the raspberry slide and on the boney roller coaster or we could just go into the door” said Jake. Olivia and Amber said “yes”. “We’re out finally” said Amber, “now we can go home, yah” said Olivia. “Jake is it cool now?”. “No it is not cool!” “oh man, I have still got that raspberry on my cushion”, “nice to know” “why thank you”. “Lets go home” said Jake. Amber and Olivia were at home, they had a shower and went to bed. Amber said “it was the worst birthday ever!”.
The End
By Courtney Smith
Owwww yelled Amber as she was putting pretty bows in her hair
“Pink and perfect” she yelled, “pink and perfect”. As she ran down the stairs she was singing “it’s my birthday, it’s my birthday and it’s going to be the best birthday ever!”. Then she was down the stairs, she sat on the couch, “where’s my breakfast” she yelled. And the Olivia her sister came down. She had purple bows in her hair.
After breakfast they went to school, Jake was out at the gate. He said “what took you so long?” Amber replied “why my hair can’t make itself”. “fair enough” Jake said. After school they were walking home, Jake found a cool house, it had skeletons on it. “Lets go and see who lives there”.
They knocked once, twice and three times. Then they opened the creaky door. Jake went in, Amber went in, “Olivia shut the door” said Amber. “Look a key” Jake said. “oh no the door locked on us, and where’s the key going now?”. “I don’t know, follow it then” said Amber. “Ok” every one said.
Olivia said “we’re on a roller coaster, yuck it has weird looking seats and they’re boney”. “Why are we sliding? Olivia what is it? I think it’s raspberry, I don’t know? Look the key it’s gone somewhere, Jake it’s behind you” Olivia said. “Stand still, Amber yelled Help” said Olivia. Jake whispered to himself “man they’re noisy”. “Sush” said Olivia, “ok”.
Huddle in we will make a plan. “Olivia you go behind Jake and I will go in front and we will jump and catch it”. “Ready steady, spaghetti”. “Sorry its just so funny, ready go! I caught it” said Olivia. “good now how are we going to get back up?” said Amber. “I don’t know we will have to go back on the raspberry slide and on the boney roller coaster or we could just go into the door” said Jake. Olivia and Amber said “yes”. “We’re out finally” said Amber, “now we can go home, yah” said Olivia. “Jake is it cool now?”. “No it is not cool!” “oh man, I have still got that raspberry on my cushion”, “nice to know” “why thank you”. “Lets go home” said Jake. Amber and Olivia were at home, they had a shower and went to bed. Amber said “it was the worst birthday ever!”.
The End
By Courtney Smith
The 3 Sisters
THE THREE SISTERS
In the jungle there lived three sisters. There names are Olivia, Emma and Elise. Elise is mean. They hated living in there because there are big ugly scary monsters, owls and also snakes. They hate scary creatures .
Emma, Elise and Olivia had nothing to eat they eat worms and snakes [gross.] The snakes are too chewy Elise keeps saying .”Well it’s going to have to do’’ said Olivia “yeah yeah” all right “.If we had a phone Emma sighed “ we could ring some of friends but we don`t .Lets go for a little walk around ok but be careful” .”No” said Elise” I’m staying here so I don’t see the monsters OK bye”.
Off Olivia and Emma went looking for help. Then they found a wood cutter he was there hunting for snakes, monsters, giant worms and owls they are all wild, hurtful and sneaky. But the girls that went for a walk didn’t see any of those creepy animals. But where Elise was the monsters were there.
Elise called for help, the other two sisters heard Elise, they found a little hole that was the way out of the jungle and back home. They drove home safe and sound in their silver car that they found in a junk yard and they fixed it up. They made it their own car forever.
By Emilee
In the jungle there lived three sisters. There names are Olivia, Emma and Elise. Elise is mean. They hated living in there because there are big ugly scary monsters, owls and also snakes. They hate scary creatures .
Emma, Elise and Olivia had nothing to eat they eat worms and snakes [gross.] The snakes are too chewy Elise keeps saying .”Well it’s going to have to do’’ said Olivia “yeah yeah” all right “.If we had a phone Emma sighed “ we could ring some of friends but we don`t .Lets go for a little walk around ok but be careful” .”No” said Elise” I’m staying here so I don’t see the monsters OK bye”.
Off Olivia and Emma went looking for help. Then they found a wood cutter he was there hunting for snakes, monsters, giant worms and owls they are all wild, hurtful and sneaky. But the girls that went for a walk didn’t see any of those creepy animals. But where Elise was the monsters were there.
Elise called for help, the other two sisters heard Elise, they found a little hole that was the way out of the jungle and back home. They drove home safe and sound in their silver car that they found in a junk yard and they fixed it up. They made it their own car forever.
By Emilee
The Portal
The portal
Once there was a deep dark forest .In the forest there lived three brothers called Tai ,Jake and Henry .Tai had black hair .Jake had brown hair .Henry had black hair .
One day the three brothers went to look for food .On the way they found a portal .But Henry slipped .Tai grabbed Henry .Jake grabbed Tai but Jake fell in too .
When they hit the ground they saw a boy .He was called Zaimana .The boys asked Zaimana how to get home .When they got home they got sick of their old stories so they told their new story and they never got bored again.
By Tai
Once there was a deep dark forest .In the forest there lived three brothers called Tai ,Jake and Henry .Tai had black hair .Jake had brown hair .Henry had black hair .
One day the three brothers went to look for food .On the way they found a portal .But Henry slipped .Tai grabbed Henry .Jake grabbed Tai but Jake fell in too .
When they hit the ground they saw a boy .He was called Zaimana .The boys asked Zaimana how to get home .When they got home they got sick of their old stories so they told their new story and they never got bored again.
By Tai
The little girl and the monster
The little girl and the monster
Once upon a time there lived a wonderful little girl. called Lilly. Lilly had friends called Mikayla.W and Mikayla. R. One day in the forest. Lilley went to find her friends in the forest.. Then she heard a noise. It was a spooky noise. Lilly was scared. She yelled!! “Mikayla Mikayla” but they couldn’t hear.
The monster came closer so she ran back home. She looked in her room then she went up stair. She saw her mum and dad laying on the floor. She screamed and screamed she heard the door open. It was the monster. The monster had google eyes, ears, mouth and nose.
The monster said’’ I ate your friends’’ Lilly said’’ what did you do?’’ he said ‘’I ate them now I want to eat you’’. Lilly ran up stairs and hid under the beds.
The monster came up stairs and Lilly got her dads gun and shot him and she lived happily ever after.
By Paige.w
Once upon a time there lived a wonderful little girl. called Lilly. Lilly had friends called Mikayla.W and Mikayla. R. One day in the forest. Lilley went to find her friends in the forest.. Then she heard a noise. It was a spooky noise. Lilly was scared. She yelled!! “Mikayla Mikayla” but they couldn’t hear.
The monster came closer so she ran back home. She looked in her room then she went up stair. She saw her mum and dad laying on the floor. She screamed and screamed she heard the door open. It was the monster. The monster had google eyes, ears, mouth and nose.
The monster said’’ I ate your friends’’ Lilly said’’ what did you do?’’ he said ‘’I ate them now I want to eat you’’. Lilly ran up stairs and hid under the beds.
The monster came up stairs and Lilly got her dads gun and shot him and she lived happily ever after.
By Paige.w
Once in a Foggy Forest
ONCE IN A FOGGY FOREST
Once in a fogg y forest there was a dragon that had been destroying the world for 555 years.
King Jake and his 2 bothers Zaimana and Tai they had been trying to defeat the balky dragon for 555 years.
The 2 brothers went on a quest to get the dragon and stab it in the heart with a diamond.
The dragon lived in a very very dark cave the dragon woke up hearing the 2 boys walking to the cave. The monster came out. But he came out when they had the diamond knife and they killed him with the knife just in time.
And king Jake was happy and they had a celebration for them.
By Zaimana
Once in a fogg y forest there was a dragon that had been destroying the world for 555 years.
King Jake and his 2 bothers Zaimana and Tai they had been trying to defeat the balky dragon for 555 years.
The 2 brothers went on a quest to get the dragon and stab it in the heart with a diamond.
The dragon lived in a very very dark cave the dragon woke up hearing the 2 boys walking to the cave. The monster came out. But he came out when they had the diamond knife and they killed him with the knife just in time.
And king Jake was happy and they had a celebration for them.
By Zaimana
Lost at Sea
Lost at sea
Race you there I said to my friend Elise .This holiday I was at my nanas beach house with my dad and my friend .We got to the beach splash splash went the water as we jumped in .Dad yelled “don’t go out to far” we replied “we won’t”. We didn’t realize how far out we were .Elise yelled I think we are caught in a rip she knew that because she had payed attention in the beach safety lesson we had at school .The waves were crashing so hard onto shore .I turned around and saw that Elise was treading water .I thought I might start treading water, but I was a useless swimmer .We were both treading water then we bumped into each other .We looked around, we were surrounded by jellyfish “OW” I screamed Elise shouted “what happened?” .I replied “I think I got a jellyfish sting”. We heard a sound it sounded like a rescue boat .And it was a rescue boat, it took us back to shore . “Thank goodness you girls are ok” said my dad .The lifeguards checked my jellyfish sting they said that it will heal in no time .We wrapped a blanket around us because our lips were blue .We went back to the beach house and had a hot chocolate .We knew we were safe where we were .So we didn’t go to the beach on our holiday again!
By Emma
Race you there I said to my friend Elise .This holiday I was at my nanas beach house with my dad and my friend .We got to the beach splash splash went the water as we jumped in .Dad yelled “don’t go out to far” we replied “we won’t”. We didn’t realize how far out we were .Elise yelled I think we are caught in a rip she knew that because she had payed attention in the beach safety lesson we had at school .The waves were crashing so hard onto shore .I turned around and saw that Elise was treading water .I thought I might start treading water, but I was a useless swimmer .We were both treading water then we bumped into each other .We looked around, we were surrounded by jellyfish “OW” I screamed Elise shouted “what happened?” .I replied “I think I got a jellyfish sting”. We heard a sound it sounded like a rescue boat .And it was a rescue boat, it took us back to shore . “Thank goodness you girls are ok” said my dad .The lifeguards checked my jellyfish sting they said that it will heal in no time .We wrapped a blanket around us because our lips were blue .We went back to the beach house and had a hot chocolate .We knew we were safe where we were .So we didn’t go to the beach on our holiday again!
By Emma
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