The Spooky House
A long time ago there was a spooky house. There were three kids trapped in the spooky house.
Their names were Matt, Dion and Tai.
They couldn't get out. There were heaps of doors. There were about 50 doors. They looked in the first door. Nothing was in it. They looked in the second one. There was nothing in there. They looked in the third one there was nothing there. They looked in the fourth one. There was nothing there. They looked in the fifth one nothing there.
At last they were at the end door, there was another door that led them out.
There were no more spooky houses ever again because they went to their house. There was a place that smashes houses down.
It is in town they told them to smash all the spooky houses down.
By Dion
I like how you put commers between the names. because you were making a list.
ReplyDeleteGood observation Keeley and Amber. I like the way Dion used commas too.
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